In "October in Mirrors Burnt with Fur," the line "afternoon hurts -- I can't stop." really stopped me. Granted, it's the last line of the poem, but the words alone caused me to pause. After reading and re-reading this poem, I'm still trying to find the deeper meaning or the theme within. I love some of the imagery like comparing sorrow to velvet and licking a hallucination, but the poem as a whole entity let me feeling confused. None of the lines seem connected. I've seen this before in the excerpts from My Life by Lyn Hejinian. This type of disconnect really makes the reader work to try and make some sense of the lines.
Another poem that made me sit up and take notice was "The Comparisons."
The lines:
"What is the point of writing a memoir
if you have no memory?
A cat barking
where the east swings
west..."
made me laugh out loud. It might have been the image of a cat
barking, but everything seems to contradict, much like a comparison. A lot of
times in poetry, I really enjoy comparisons that I wouldn't have thought of on
my own.
Hi Lindsey! I agree with what you said about the imagery in this book. I too found it to be one of the stronger aspects. And also about learning about the author. I think it would be really interesting to know what Jen's train of thought was when she wrote this. I feel like there are probably some great stories behind these poems!
ReplyDelete